Let me bleed
Lie to me
Twist the words, make them timeless
When the sun goes down and stars shimmer…
that soft silver glint in the eye
Pray
Pray that the clouds unleash
Sky paints a black coat to its soul
Move the shade away
Let the storm petrify
Warmth still lurks on the hammer’s head
Step away
Don’t tend to my wounds
Because sometimes
You bleed just to know you’re alive
This is amazing! Absolutely loved the feeling of it.
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Thanx Maria, Glad you liked it 🙂
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Always a pleasure reading from you 🙂
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Loved the poem, loved the song.
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Thanx Sonya 🙂
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Let me Bleed so that I come to know
How painful wounds can be
Because wounds make me realise
This is a real world
Where you live
Live with agony
Live with fallacies
Let me Bleed
Because not every battle can be won
Let me lose
Let me be a real person
With real emotions. …..
Liked your poem Akhiz
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Thnx Maryam
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You bleed just to know you’re alive
You were meant to bleed
To let yourself clarified
That you are alive!
You’ve written it very well it’s amazing!
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Thanx for the addition its awesome…. its just like jawab e shikwa 🙂
Glad you liked it 🙂
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You’re welcome!
Oh that! Shikwa Jawab-e-shikwa is beyond awesome!
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Oh such a beautifully haunting song, goes so well with your poem Akhiz ! 🙂
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Thanx Zee 🙂
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This is lovely.
I missed your poetry.
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Thank you, Glad you liked it 🙂
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This was amazing
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Thank you 🙂
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“because sometimes you bleed just to know you are alive.” This is as true as it gets. I love this Akhiz !
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Thanks Zee, i got the notification for ur comment approval, please check that you are following my blog, i dont wanna loose ur insights on my writings 🙂
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But I am following you, what’s happening 😵wait let me check again😯
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Reblogged this on Akhiz Munawar and commented:
First Blog post of the year… something i wrote in 2015 🙂
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hi akhiz. nice work, show your love and support by following me. I am new here
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Hi Swati, glad to meet you, welcome to the blogging world
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